Before todays class for peer review, i was already aware of most of the things I can fix in my essay. All of the obvious stuff like I need to add a conclusion, more quotes, in text citations, and a works cited page. My peer review partners added really good critics to my essay as well as compliments which is really nice because I know what stood out and was strong enough to be complimented so I can now focus on my weak spots. They mentioned that I should further elaborate on some of my points by adding quotes or example to help support my claims. They also mentioned I should add more of an analysis on some of my quotes which is a great idea because itll help me express my thoughts better to the reader. For my revision I plan to reread my essay for starters and make a list of the things I need to fix or add, this will include the obvious stuff, my peer review partners ideas, as well as anything I think of as I reread the essay. I made an outline at the beginning of this paper and I am going to make another one to make sure I hit all the points I wanted to.